It’s been a busy past month in my writing. I attended my annual writing retreat just after my last update, and had a really great weekend. As a group, we made some progress on our collaborative fantasy romance, as well as digging deeper into our next project, a planned collection of sci fi stories.
The sci fi stories center around a group of characters on the run (via spaceship), with each author taking ownership of two characters. We wanted to explore how the group got together, so we played out the origin story in a loose D&D game style. They all meet while separately robbing a museum on the same night, so we drew up a map of the museum and moved our character figurines through it as we invented the story in real-time. It was a LOT of fun, and we ended up with an extremely detailed outline for what I think will be a very cool story.
I also made some progress on my revisions of Thorns I, and finished this latest revision pass about a week after the retreat. I sent it out for second-round beta reader feedback, and will see how that goes. A lot of changes happened in the revisions, so I’m curious to see how it reads now.
Since sending Thorns I off, I’ve been working on a higher level to outline my Thorns series more clearly. I’ve come to the conclusion that what started as a short story is now going to be a five book series. Book 1 is almost done, Book 2 is drafted, and I wrote a big bulk of Book 4, Penelope’s novel. So now I’m outlining Books 3 and 5, and also looking at some revision plans for Books 2 and 4. It’s complicated! I hope to have some really solid outlines by the end of the month.
In between outlining, I wanted to do something a little less complicated and more around actual writing, so I’ve been doing daily writing prompts – sort of bouncing between doing a prompt each day, or doing some outlining. I’ve been using the prompts to explore the characters from my series in more depth, so it’s been a good support to my larger writing goals. And just been fun!
So just for fun, here’s a bit from a prompt about making grilled cheese, which I decided to use to explore my new sci fi characters. Enjoy!
I got to work on my grilled cheese, using the super fancy stove in the commissary. Seriously, I’ve seen navigation controls with fewer buttons.
That may have been a problem. I mean, everything was going along great at first. The bread was all toasty, the cheese was all melty, the butter was all buttery and I had a fantastic grilled cheese in process, when suddenly it exploded.
I don’t know how it happened. I didn’t think cheese was explodable, but maybe there’s some nuance I missed.
All I know is one minute everything was fine, and the next minute there was smoke and blobs of cheese and smears of butter everywhere. I blame the stove.
I would blame the AI, seeing as he clearly had it in for me, but if it was him, he did a really good job of simulating distress.
“There is smoke in the air and butter on my countertops and—and—my sensors are picking up cheese! On the ceiling!” the AI howled.
2 thoughts on “Writing Update (September, 2022)”
I am so in awe or a writing retreat where you actually work on things together – for publication! And scifi stories!
The cheese story is great; coincidentally I had just settled down to have my toasted cheese sandwich for lunch 🙂
And my review of Nocturne will be on my blog 29th October…
It’s interesting to hear about your writing process, a “behind the scenes” view of how the final version of your novels get to publication. And your writing prompt story is funny – I can picture Alexa doing the same thing with just a little more development. 🙂