A Look at Humanity Through Sci Fi Lenses

I finished my first book of 2012 and, feeling very virtuous, I managed to make it one which applied to two of my challenges!  Five-Odd, a collection of five (longish) short stories, edited by Groff Conklin, applies to both the Sci-Fi Experience and the Dusty Bookshelf Challenge.

I’ve decided Dusty Bookshelf reviews deserve a little back-story.

How long has it been on my shelf? Since August, 2011, so about four months.

I almost never buy unread books, so how did I get it? My Book Club had an all-holiday party in August (because there aren’t any major holidays in August), and I picked this up at the White Elephant gift exchange.

Now that I’ve read it, am I keeping it? I haven’t decided.  I liked it–but I have high standards about what books I own.  I’ll see how I feel about it when I have a little distance–say, next month.

Five-Odd is a nice mix of intriguing technology and of philosophy.  It’s definitely not action-adventure sci fi.  Most of the stories are about futures not so different from our present, except for some crucial advance in technology, and changes in thought because of it.  Almost every story made me think about some aspect of the world and, more often, of humanity.

Isaac Asimov’s “The Dead Past” asks whether the past really is dead, while also looking at government repression and the end of privacy–but not at all the way that sentence makes it sound.  The story centers around a fascinating device that will let anyone look at past moments.

“Something Strange” by Kingsley Amis felt like the weak link here to me.  It’s about four people living together on a small space station, but the characters were too surreal in some ways, and then the story ended just as it felt like it was coming to the most interesting part.

J.T. McIntosh’s “Unit” addresses a question about identity.  It then veers off into a story more about prejudices, piracy and collaborative intelligence, which was also interesting though I would have liked more about the idea the story started with–about people who choose to wipe away their entire past, and be entirely remade as new people with new personalities.

“Gone Fishing” by James H. Schmitz is about a conman who thinks he’s going to steal a transporter device from a befuddled scientist, only to wind up stranded on a distant planet for five years.  The transporter was interesting, but more interesting was the idea of how he would cope with five years of solitude.

“Big Ancestor” by F. L. Wallace is set the farthest in the future, when humans from Earth have reached the stars, and met humans from a hundred other planets.  A team of scientists from various planets goes in search of their common ancestor.  There’s an excellent twist to this, and I recommend not reading Conklin’s introduction, which blatantly hints at it.  There’s also an interesting passing line here, when one human mentions that most of the human races discovered space travel on their own, and then they helped the ones that didn’t.  After all my years of hearing about Star Trek‘s Prime Directive, General Order Number One, to never ever ever ever interfere with less developed races, this was shocking.  And yes, I know Star Trek does it all the time anyway 🙂 but it felt very different hearing it as an accepted thing!

I felt a little doubtful about reviewing this one because I wondered how easy it would be for anyone to find it.  But it turns out it’s available cheap on Amazon if you do want it (and no one paid me for that link!)  If you like philosophical sci fi, it’s a good read.  The stories were written in the ’50s and ’60s and have that flavor.  I don’t know that I’d call them sci fi classics, but they are classic sci fi…if you see the distinction there!  🙂

The Lazy Girl and the Enchantress

As you know if you were reading this blog during November, I wrote a retelling of “The Twelve Dancing Princesses” for National Novel Writing Month.  My narrator, Lyra, was a storyteller, so within the novel I wrote several short stories for her to tell.  I want to share one with you today–you may recognize the beginning, as I put up an excerpt in November.  But today I’m posting the whole story.  🙂

Writing stories for Lyra was particularly interesting, because I had to think about the kind of stories she would tell.  For one thing, she has a more poetic style than I do (if that makes any sense!)  She also lives inside of a Brothers Grimm story, and has been reading that type of story her whole life.  So when I wrote stories for her, I wanted to create something that was very Brothers Grimm-influenced, but hopefully makes a bit more sense to a modern audience!

This story isn’t based on any particular fairy tale, but throws some traditional elements together–with twists.

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Once upon a time, there was a shopkeeper’s daughter who was very beautiful.  It was a sad fact that because she was beautiful, people’s automatic inclination was to do things for her.  That might not have been so bad in itself, but she had realized this tendency early on and loved to take advantage of it.

When her mother asked her to clean the house or to help with the laundry, she’d make endless excuses to get out of it, preferring to spend the time combing her hair or trying on different dresses.  When her mother did insist on her working, she was so slow about it that the good woman would eventually give up in exasperation and do the job herself.

When her father asked her to mind the shop, she would avoid helping customers if at all possible, and when she couldn’t avoid it she was as slow as you could imagine.  She asked the customers to pack up their own purchases and couldn’t be bothered even to do the counting to hand out change.  You may expect that service was slow and the customers ended up waiting around, whenever she was minding the shop.  The men, however, so enjoyed looking at her that they didn’t often complain.  Her father still knew that he was losing business because not everyone was willing to wait—and he wasn’t winning customers to his shop from the women in town.

One day the prince of that country passed through the town and his party stopped at the shop to buy fresh supplies for their journey.  It happened to be a day when the girl was (in theory) helping in the shop.  The prince saw her, and was sure that he had never seen anyone so beautiful, which may have been true.  He had been reading too many stories, and become convinced that such a beautiful face could only indicate a kind nature, a worthy spirit, and a personality that would match his own—in other words, that her beauty proved she was his soul mate, which it didn’t at all.

He proposed to her at once.  She was lazy but she wasn’t stupid, and she was quite sure that the wife of a handsome prince would have all the dresses she could ever want, and no work to do at all.  She accepted, and off they went to the royal castle. Continue reading “The Lazy Girl and the Enchantress”

Robin McKinley’s Very Dark “Sunshine”

I think I should begin this post by saying that I love Robin McKinley’s books.  You’ve probably seen her referenced around here as one of my favorite authors.  That said, now I can tell you why I didn’t love Sunshine.

Sunshine was very nearly the last McKinley book I hadn’t read (the only other one is Pegasus, and a friend tells me it has a cliffhanger so I’m waiting for the sequel to come out first).  The funny thing is, I used to know why I hadn’t read Sunshine.  See, it’s her vampire book, and I’ve never been a vampire fan.  It’s also darker, and has a more modern setting.  So I just wasn’t that interested.

But all of my friends had read Sunshine, and they all really loved it (possibly because they are vampire fans), and it was the last one (more or less) that I hadn’t read…so I kind of forgot why I wasn’t reading it.

I finally read Sunshine recently.  It wasn’t a bad book, but I did have problems with it, and it very much was not my kind of book.

Sunshine is set in a world much like ours, but the creatures of gothic novels are real: vampires, werewolves, demons.  Humanity is in an ongoing war, and losing.  The book centers on Rae, nicknamed Sunshine, whose life revolves around her family’s coffee house, where she’s the head baker and cinnamon roll queen.  Life takes an unexpected turn when she drives out to the lake one evening, and ends up captured by vampires.  They chain her up in an abandoned house, an offering for their other prisoner–a vampire named Con.

Con, for reasons more mercenary than merciful, doesn’t drain Sunshine’s blood immediately, and the two of them end up working together to escape.  Sunshine gets back to her normal life, but can’t shake the experience.  She starts discovering that she has strange powers, and that she’s still tied somehow to Con and his enemies.

I liked Sunshine (the character).  The book is in first person and we spend a good chunk of the book reading her thoughts and memories.  She’s pulled in an interesting way between two lives–her ordinary baker life, and this dark world of vampires.  She’s a reluctant hero who just wants to go back to her cinnamon rolls, but finds the other world thrust on her, and with it strange powers and plenty of danger.  She’s a strong character, and I liked following her journey.

I didn’t like Con.  It may not have helped that my friends set me up to expect him to be a great romantic hero, and then…it didn’t come out that way in my reading.  Quite apart from the blood-drinking aspect of things, I didn’t find him likable and I didn’t get any chemistry between Sunshine and him.  She keeps describing him as ugly, for one thing (and yes, sometimes I like the ugly characters because of that–see the Phantom of the Opera–but not in this case).  The larger problem is that he never expresses emotions.  I like Vulcans and I like the occasional mysterious enigma, but I just couldn’t get any sense of Con, or whether he cared at all about Sunshine, because he wouldn’t express anything, ever.

I didn’t much like Mel either.  Notice Mel wasn’t mentioned in that summary up there?  That’s how irrelevant he is, even though he’s Sunshine’s boyfriend and theoretically the other point on the romantic triangle.  Somehow, despite being a tattoed, former biker turned chef, he’s an incredibly bland character.  I think the clincher for me was when Sunshine asked him, sort of rhetorically, who he was, and he answered, “I’m your friend.”  That doesn’t really feel like the right response from a long-time boyfriend and narrative love interest…

I actually liked the more minor characters better.  There’s a whole family of people who work or are regular customers at the coffee house, and some of them are quite interesting and entertaining–like Sunshine’s stepfather Charlie, one of the “big good guys” of her universe, or a customer who turns out to be part demon and can turn himself blue.

My problems with Con and Mel may be me–anecdotally I can tell you that I have three friends who love them, so take from that what you will.  The plot of the story is exciting, and the world is intriguing, although it takes some time to get a proper picture of it.  That’s normal for McKinley, who sometimes makes things mysterious at first, and you gradually start putting pieces together.  This is a dark book, with a lot of blood in it–not too graphic, mostly, but there’s a lot of it.  That’s what makes this not my kind of book, so you’ve been warned…  Also, definitely an adult book, not YA.

It does make me impressed with McKinley in a way, though.  For most of my favorite authors, most of their books are similar (which in a way is nice, because I know what I’m getting).  McKinley has impressive range to write very different books: Dragonhaven, Beauty and Sunshine read like they were written by three different authors.

One more point to address–a sequel.  There isn’t one, but fans have been asking for one for years.  McKinley has said that she’ll write one if she has an idea for one, which says to me that she has, for now at least, no intention of writing one.  (If you ever meet her, don’t ask about a sequel–based on her blog, I guarantee she won’t like it!)

I have to say I agree with McKinley.  I don’t think the book needs a sequel.  I may think that in part because I just don’t care which man Sunshine ends up with…  But the larger point is that I think the book came to an ending.  There’s plenty of plot room for a sequel, and questions left unanswered.  However, I think the book really was about Sunshine’s growth, and her acceptance of herself, both the baker and the monster-fighter.  She comes to a realization at the end, and for me, that is the end.

Final analysis: if you like vampires, read Sunshine.  If you don’t like blood, read Beauty or Spindle’s End instead.

Author’s Site: http://www.robinmckinley.com/

Other reviews (including some who loved the book far more than I did!):
Suite 101
Angieville
Writegray
Bookshelf Bombshells
There are many more–want to tell me about yours, or one you enjoyed?

NaNoWriMo Revisited

As you most likely know, I spent November working on a novel for NaNoWriMo–National Novel Writing Month.  I finished the 50,000 word goal in November, but didn’t actually finish the novel.  So I set a new goal of 25,000 words in December, and promised to report back.

I ended up writing 26,000 words in December, finishing the goal and the novel on December 30th.  It actually was harder than the larger goal in November!  Part of that was holiday distractions; most of it was that I had blocked off November for novel-writing, and come December I had to catch up on other projects, splitting my time and attention.  I’m glad I did it this way, though.  If I had waited until, say, January to do another big push on the novel, I think I would have lost a lot of momentum.  As it was, I was able to keep going at a good rate (even if I was behind the word goal most of the month!) and use the long weekends around holidays at the end of the month to finish strong.

I really enjoyed writing a novel this quickly–it was more intense than my usual pace.  Also more exhausting!  But I got to know the characters in a different way.  I think there was less thought and more that was coming on instinct.  I guess I’ll see how that worked out when I do the revision…  I already know there are some big changes to make (like working in a character I didn’t realize needed to be there until 3/4 of the way through the book!) but I think it’s a decent first draft.

Before I revise The Twelve Dancing Princesses story (76,000 words, but I still don’t have a title…), I’m going to go back to my novel about a wandering adventurer (also title-less; it’s a problem) to do revision there.  For one thing, I need to bring some of the overlapping chapter into line with changes made while writing about the dancing princesses.

But that will probably wait until February.  If I don’t write I get depressed, so I don’t believe in fully taking time off.  However, I think I will take a month to recover from the fast pace of the last two months by doing some low-pressure writing.  I really enjoyed writing short stories for my storytelling character, so I may write more.  Or I may dip into some fanfiction, which is pretty much no-pressure, since I’m never going to publish it.

Anyway, it’s been a fun journey, and thanks for coming along.  🙂  I’ll probably share a few more excerpts from the NaNo novel for future Fiction Fridays, so stay tuned!

2011 End of the Year Round-up

It’s the start of a new year, and the perfect time to look at the last year–including how my reading went!  I already gave you some of an update in the Reading Challenges Post, but I wanted to do a round-up of favorite books (and least favorite!)

To give you some stats, my total books read in 2011 was 169.  I’ve been keeping track for the last 7 years, and 169 is about normal for me.  My last two years of reading were lower, so I’m glad to see that rise again.  Of those 169, 50 were rereads, or about 30%.  I’ve decided to only choose from new books for the selections below.

Here’s the good and the bad of 2011.

1) Best Book  –  I am having trouble making a decision here.  Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte was amazing; I stayed up late two nights in a row reading it, and I loved the writing and the romance.  Turnip and Arabella from The Mischief of the Mistletoe by Lauren Willig were, as I expected, my favorite characters I met all year.  And The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins really is as good as all the buzz suggests.  So there’s my top three, very different, best books of the year.

2) Worst Book  –  No question here.  Alcatraz vs. the Evil Librarians by Brandon Sanderson was awful on almost every level.  Honorable (or dishonorable?) mention to How I Stole Johnny Depp’s Alien Girlfriend by Gary Ghislain; you wouldn’t think a book with that title could go wrong, but it did, by being all about a teenage boy’s crush on a girl who was completely horrible to him—but beautiful.

3) Most Disappointing Book  –  Mockingjay by Suzanne Collins.  My hopes were very high (see #1) and they were sadly dashed.

4) Most Surprising (in a Good Way)  –  Probably this one goes to 2001: A Space Odyssey by Arthur C. Clarke.  After seeing the movie, I was surprised by how coherent the book was!

5) Best Series You Discovered – Since I have started a lot of series and need to read through them, I’m basing this one more on promise than on what I’ve actually read.  With that in mind, I’m giving the nod to The 500 Kingdoms by Mercedes Lackey.  Sleeping Beauty was good, and based on the world and the writing, I’m hopeful about the rest of the books in the series.

6) Most Hilarious Read  –  I read several of Terry Pratchett’s Discworld books, and I’m tempted to give it collectively to them.  To choose one, I’m saying Going Postal.  Funnily enough, Terry Pratchett was my most hilarious read of last year too.  I’m not really surprised…

7) Can’t Believe I Waited Until 2011 to Read It  –  I could say Jane Eyre, but I somehow feel more inclined to say The Eyre Affair.  I first heard about The Eyre Affair in high school, and have been meaning to read it ever since.  I suppose the same is true of Jane Eyre, but I was actually more fascinated by the premise of The Eyre Affair—ironically, since I ended up liking Jane better.

8) Most Looking Forward To in 2012  –  I’m not sure this year.  A lot of authors I follow are working on something interesting, but they won’t necessarily be out in 2012.  So I think I’m most looking forward to the next Jacky Faber book by L. A. Meyer.  I don’t know for sure he’ll have one out either, but I have faith.  🙂  He always has, for the last several years.  But even if I’m not anticipating a lot of new books in 2012, there are plenty of already-published ones I’m looking forward to reading!