Writing Wednesday: A Little Holiday Reading

Happy holidays!  I hope you’re all enjoying a nice day of fun and festivities.  Just in case you’d like to spend a quiet evening reading, don’t forget that my writing partners and I released a Christmas short story on Monday!  An epilogue to The Servants and the Beast, I of course recommend both as fun, heartwarming, fairy tale-inspired stories.

I’m still working on my non-fiction revision tips book, so for the holidays I thought I’d offer a throw-back excerpt.  Enjoy this snippet from Book Two of my Guardian of the Opera trilogy, as the prospect of Christmas sends the Phantom into something of a panic…

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Near the beginning of December, Erik found himself with a problem that he couldn’t bring to Meg.  The weight of it got heavier and heavier until finally it drove him to seek the Daroga out—not as a good source of aid, but as the only one available.  And after all, things had been…relatively pleasant, the last time they spoke.

He arrived at the Daroga’s small apartment in the early twilight, just as the sun was setting.  He only ever went out in the dusky hours, when the shadows were deep, even if he knew they still failed to hide his mask, failed to conceal him in his dark cloak.  It still felt a little less alarming that way.

The Daroga invited him in courteously and with less surprise evident than was probably present.  Erik had never been here before, though he had known for years where the Daroga lived.  It was the kind of information he had felt he should have in reserve.

They passed a few moments in small talk, sitting in the parlor, before the inevitable question arose.  “So tell me, to what do I owe the honor of this most unusual visit?”

Erik hesitated, tapping his fingers against his knee.  “I need your advice.”  He took a deep breath.  “I don’t know what to do about Christmas.”

“I believe midnight mass and a tree are customary,” the Daroga said dryly.  “Based purely on observation of your Christian revelries, of course.”

“No, I don’t mean that,” Erik said with a wave of one hand.  “I mean…about Meg.  I don’t know if I should get her a gift or not.”  He had remarked on it in an off-hand way when the Daroga had visited, and the idea had burrowed into his mind, with accompanying doubts.

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Release Day: After the Sparkles Settled + Servants on Audio

So excited by this Christmas-time release day! My first audiobook, plus a Christmas epilogue to the story, are launching today.

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We’re delighted to announce a double release day today!  The Servants and the Beast is now available as an audiobook, read for you by five Stonehenge Circle Writers.  Plus, get into the holiday spirit with a special Christmas epilogue, After the Sparkles Settled.

After the Sparkles Settled

Written by Karen Blakely, R.A. Gates, Kelly Haworth, Jenniffer Lee and Cheryl Mahoney

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The five authors who collaborated for The Servants and the Beast have come together again to bring you this very special Christmas tale, looking in on the characters at the castle several months after the curse was lifted. As they celebrate the holidays, you can find out what’s happened to your favorite characters. Is Hugo finally courting Isadora? Has Quillsby learned to keep a secret? Will Robert propose to Lady Jayne–or Charles to Frostine? And how are Estienne and Beau doing, now that the Beast is…

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Blog Hop: Christmas Season in the Pages

book-blogger-hop-finalToday’s Book Blogger Hop question is:  What is your favorite Christmas-themed fiction or nonfiction book?

I only have a couple favorite Christmas books.  If I’m feeling traditional, I like A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens.  My other favorite is The Mischief of the Mistletoe by Lauren Willig, a very sweet Regency romance involving spies, set at Christmas with a cameo by Jane Austen.  It’s delightful.

This year I just finished reading Skipping Christmas by John Grisham, which was very funny, with a heartwarming ending.

What are your favorite Christmas books?  Evidently I could use some new ones!

Writing Wednesday: Between the Stories

After the big push of NaNoWriMo in November, I’m doing a complete change of pace for December.  I’m still doing my daily writing, but in a very different style.  Instead of writing a story, I’m writing about writing stories by working on a new nonfiction project.

I’ve been attending my writing group for about seven years now, and I’ve noticed patterns emerging.  We seem to give the same type of advice to different people again and again.  Which is fine, and I don’t mind!  But it did make me think it ought to be possible to pull some of this advice together into something standardized.  So I’ve been working on a book of revision advice.  There are a lot of books out there about writing, but I haven’t seen much focused specifically on revising.

So that’s my current project!  It’s not nearly as long or involved as a novel, so I’m hoping to do the draft (or the bulk of it) this month, and publish some time next year.  Although this is rather new and different for me, so we’ll see how that actually pans out!

Here’s an excerpt from one of my sections, with one of the most common advice given at my writing group.  This is (currently) Section 10, Breaking Out of the Brain Jar: Talking Heads

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There’s an old episode of Star Trek involving three brains in jars who, thanks to technology, can talk to each other and the rest of the characters.  I bring this up because a lot of writers fall into the trap of writing their characters as though they are talking brains in jars.  Not literally—that could involve some quite interesting details, in fact—but rather with the complete absence of any details suggesting these characters have bodies and are inhabiting the space they’re in.

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