I loved Jennifer Nielson’s False Prince (and liked its two sequels reasonably well), so I really wanted to love Mark of the Thief. And from that, you already know it didn’t go all that well, right? There were a lot of good things in here–but somehow I could never quite get into this book.
The story is centered on Nic, a slave in a Roman mine a few centuries after Julius Caesar. Nic is sent into a secret chamber deep in the ground to seek Caesar’s bulla, a kind of amulet. Not unlike Aladdin, Nic manages to take possession of the bulla himself, and finds that it grants powerful but unpredictable magic. Soon Nic has a price on his head, with powerful Romans from the Emperor down chasing him, and the fate of the Roman Empire at stake.
Ancient Rome is an era I enjoy, and I like the concept of a scrappy, defiant slave seizing power and freedom. There’s lots of conspiracy and mystery in here, with neither Nic nor the reader always sure who can be trusted. We also get a cool griffin, a tough girl Nic gradually builds a relationship with, and plenty of displays of magic. Because also, magic in ancient Rome? Very cool.
So. Where did I run into a problem? It never quite felt like ancient Rome. Continue reading “Book Review: Mark of the Thief”



